Snow Falling on Cedars

by David Guterson

Snow Falling on Cedars: Style 1 key example

Style
Explanation and Analysis:

The writing style of Snow Falling on Cedars shifts between two distinct rhythms. Its recurring trial scenes move at a stiff, procedural pace, and these scenes provides a predictable structure for the events to unfold. By contrast, the book’s flashbacks stretch longer. They contain slower emotional reflection and employ more winding descriptions. The rhythm of these scenes allows the narrator to show how moments in memories often don’t stay fitted together in a logical order. When they are interleaved with one another, these opposing patterns of courtroom and flashback split the book’s structure. Each shift Guterson makes between past and present echoes a change in how time works for his characters.

The diction Guterson uses also builds the contrast between these modes. In the novel’s many flashbacks, the language tends to employ more poetic phrasing and linger on natural details. Descriptions of fog on water and shadowy trees fill long passages and are often just as detailed as memories of people and conversations. Guterson repeatedly reminds readers that the natural world has weight and affects the lives of the people he’s describing. In trial scenes the outside world has less of a stake. Characters speak plainly and their testimony sounds stripped down, almost flat. This contrast helps the reader feel the difference the author is trying to demonstrate between their intense inner thoughts and the outward restraint they are all socially conditioned to show. 

Guterson also often uses figurative language to align emotional confusion or sadness with the natural world. San Piedro’s powerful tide, snow, and never-retreating shadows often match the uncertainty his characters feel. Sometimes water distorts sight, and sometimes trees block or partially obscure an important view. These comparisons turn the novel’s weather and land into a kind of language that helps to represent delay or unknowing. The book’s syntax also shifts with these changes. In the flashback scenes the sentences tend to stretch long. The syntax often loops back on itself, circling a vital moment without committing to a clear path forward. In the courtroom, however, the sentence structure becomes sharper and more direct. The repetition of sensory details like the scent of cedars and the tactile experience of dampness and mist bridge the novel’s timelines, connecting past and present.