Following Bri's assault by school security guards and the release of her first song, Bri soon finds the effects of her fame spiraling out of control. Though she does what she can to control her image and how others use it, Bri quickly discovers that there are others out there trying to use her image in ways that directly contract what Bri herself wants. Through this tension, On the Come Up argues that fame can have complex consequences, especially within the context of the social media landscape and when combined with racial prejudice and exploitation.
Initially, Bri thinks that recording her first song and experiencing her big break will be simple. She believes that the process will be a matter of getting the opportunity to record her song, attracting the attention of a record label, and signing a contract—which, in her understanding, will then allow her the resources and the freedom to continue writing raps. Bri, in other words, sees fame as a simple if-then state of affairs: if she gets famous, then she'll have the freedom to do everything she wants, from writing and performing the raps she loves to raising her family out of poverty with the money she believes she'll earn.
Bri discovers quickly, however, that there's more to being a rap artist than writing raps, recording them, and performing them live. While Aunt Pooh, Bri's initial manager, suggests that this is all there is to making it in the music world, Bri's introduction to Supreme, Lawless's former manager, shows her that fame is actually a political game full of power plays, compromises, and carefully orchestrated moves designed to shape a star's public image. After Aunt Pooh arranges for Bri to record her first song, Bri runs into Supreme at a food drive, allows him to listen to her song, and later accepts his offer to send the web link to the song around. As Supreme draws Bri closer into his orbit, he slowly reveals what his plan is for Bri if she agrees to hire him and fire Pooh: capitalize on the fact that Bri's song is polarizing and already has white listeners up in arms. More specifically, Supreme plans to exploit Bri's loose associations with police violence and gang activity. Supreme encourages Bri to embrace the public persona of an angry "hood rat," a public identity he insists is compelling for the largest demographic of rap and hip-hop fans: "white kids in the suburbs." With this, Supreme suggests that fame, at least for a black female rapper like Bri, means playing a role that seems exotic and dangerous to white listeners, specifically the parents of those white teens. Controversy and fear, he suggests, are the elements that will bring about Bri's big break.
While Bri isn't upset, per se, about the fame that Supreme correctly predicts she'll experience after the release of her song, she does feel uneasy about the role that Supreme asks her to play. Bri wrote her song to speak out about the violence and prejudice that black people in Garden Heights experience daily, and she intended the song to amplify those often-unheard voices. Bri never meant to scare white parents into making the song attractive to their children by trying to ban it. In the same vein, after the security guards Long and Tate assault Bri, Bri flat-out refuses to become the poster child for the black and Latinx students at Midtown, who see her as a convenient spokesperson and symbol for the prejudice and discrimination they all experience. Even though Bri's best friend, Malik, filmed the entire encounter, leaving no doubt about how the whole thing started, Bri resents being asked to assume the role of the victimized black person in public. She's seen enough evidence to understand that no matter what she said or did, white people online will inevitably think she deserved what happened.
Bri tries over and over again to explain both her song and what happened with Long and Tate—she even allows Malik to use the footage to craft a music video for her song, shedding light on some of the points she was trying to make. However, Bri ultimately finds that her fame runs away with her anyway: the very stereotypes that make her song marketable (according to Supreme's plan) are the exact ones that make her terrifying lived experience a commodity as well. She gets the fame she wanted, but the consequences—that is, the way that her fame is co-opted to supported toxic stereotypes—are much different than she imagined. Being asked to record a ghostwritten song is the final straw for her: it shows her that if she agrees to continue working with Supreme, she'll have to let him define her fame and give up her own idea of what it should mean, an idea that Bri finds demoralizing and, in the end, not worth it.
By rejecting the role that Supreme encourages her to embrace and consequently giving up her chance of getting a record deal, Bri insists on engaging with fame on her own terms. This choice illuminates the novel's larger argument that fame is a serious force that has meaningful consequences. If Bri wants to produce and be famous for the music she believes in and the person she is, rather than letting her work and image perpetuate harmful stereotypes, her only option is to focus on creating work she believes in, putting it out in the world, and focusing on the positive effects that follow.
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Mrs. Murray's expression softens. "Following your dad's footsteps, huh?"
It's weird. Whenever other people mention him, it's like they're confirming that he's not some imaginary person I only remember bits and pieces of. And when they call him my dad and not Lawless, the underground rap legend, it's like they're reminding me that I'm his and he's mine.
"Carrying the torch for Law, huh?"
Not really. More like making my own torch and carrying it. I say, "Yeah," though, because that's what I'm supposed to say. It's part of being royalty.
I almost roll my eyes. How would these people feel if they knew Milez was here to see how messed up we are to remind him how good he's got it? He's gonna go to his nice house in the suburbs and forget this in a week, tops, while we're still struggling.
My situation shouldn't be his after-school special.
There I am, on the front page of Blackout. They posted a picture from when I was in the Ring. The headline? "Teen Daughter of Murdered Underground Rap Legend Lawless Just Killed Us Her Damn Self with This New Heat!"
Side note: Do I have a name or nah? It's short enough that it could've fit, too.
"What's wrong with what you say?"
"I talk about guns and stuff, Curtis. He doesn't want people to think that's me."
"They're gonna think it anyway. If you can get something from this, forget the nonsense and go for it."
"You know who the biggest consumers of hip-hop are?"
"White kids in the suburbs," Miles answers dryly, as if he's heard this before.
"Exactly! White kids in the suburbs," Supreme says. "You know what white kids in the suburbs love? Listening to shit that scares their parents. You scare the hell outta their folks, they'll flock to you like birds. The videos from tonight? Gonna scare the hell outta them. Watch your numbers shoot up."
It actually makes sense that white kids in the suburbs will love the videos. But Long and Tate called me a "hoodlum," and I can't seem to shake that word.
"But," he says, in a way that tells me to wipe the smile off my face, "although I get the song, now people are gonna take your words at face value. And let's be real: You're clueless about half the shit you rapped about. Clips on your hips?" Trey twists his mouth. "You know damn well you don't know what a clip is, Bri."
"Yes I do!" It's the thingy that goes on the thingy on a gun.
She's still not listening to me. "If you would just listen to the song—it's not what they made it out to be, I swear. It's about playing into their assumptions about me."
"You don't get that luxury, Brianna! We don't! They never think we're just playing!"
But it's like how when she does stuff I don't like and says it's "for my own good." This is for hers. I'm willing to do anything to keep that sadness in her eyes from becoming permanent.
"That's right, fuck censorship," I say, to three hundred viewers. "They don't get it because it ain't for them to get. Besides, if I am strapped like backpacks, maybe it's 'cause I gotta be, bitch. Ain't my fault if it makes you uncomfortable. I'm uncomfortable every goddamn day of my life."
"Me and my twin know all the words to your song!" this snaggle-toothed girl pipes up.
I scribble my name for her. "Oh, for real?"
"'Strapped like backpacks, I pull triggers,'" she and her sister squeak. "'All the clips on my hips change my figure.'"
I stop writing.
How old are they? Six? Seven?
It's like having a bucket of ice water thrown into my face.
Ratchet hood rat.
Thousands of people just heard me act like that. Millions more may see the video. They won't care that my life is a mess and I had every right to be mad. They'll just see an angry black girl from the ghetto, acting like they expected me to act.
Supreme laughs to himself. "You played the role," he says. "Goddamn, you played the role."
Problem is, I wasn't playing. That's what I've become.
"Do you know what your aunt's biggest problem is?"
I look at the jailhouse. That's kinda obvious at the moment. "She's locked up."
"No. That's not even her biggest problem," says Jay. "Pooh doesn't know who she is, and by not knowing who she is, she doesn't know her worth. So, who are you?"
"What?"
"I'm done being who my dad wants me to be," Miles says. "It's not worth it."
Does he mean what I think he means? "You're giving up your rap career?"
Miles slowly nods. "Yeah. I am. Besides, is it really mine if I'm not being myself?